Another set of eyes

I have begun the process of taking apart the Karma Stone chapter by chapter, deleting superflous words, but rounding the scenes out and adding more show as I reduce the tell. I really believe in this story and want it at its finest for publishing. The story remains one of the creepiest I have read, but even as I complete this and work on editing face the music, I am back at writing a sequel to the Karma Stone. That is why I am back to the basic form of tearing it down and rebuilding it better. I do not want to let it go with imperfections. I am shooting for the end of July now, and hope to have the sequel completed by the first of the year. This last two years has been a tough one, I am ready to move on.